Slogan Help

[young_ss]

Which sounds better?

phones are free at 5s3

phones free at 5s3

your phones free at 5s3

cell phones free at 5s3

?

Thank you all for your help

[lumkin]

out of those four choices i would choose "phones are free at 5s3".

Im not keen on the 5s3 bit though, its abit of a tounge twizzler to say, is that your website name?

[AstaProxy]

also can try for "free phones at 5s3"

[4220niller]

ye.. i like the one from AstaProxy better than any of the listed ones.

[Syntax]

Well, like the previous posts said I don't really understand 5s3, but it sort of goes with the slogan.

I'd use 'Phones are free at 5s3,' but you might want to check other peoples opinions :)

[Magnus]

I like "free phones at 5s3" best. It sounds much better then the rest.

[creativehustle]

i like "phones are free at 5s3" but i dont like the 5s3
part... i can see that your trying to make it brandable
but its just not catchy enough, but thats just my opinion

[Fewski]

phones are free at 5s3

But instead of 'are' maybe 'for'? Little better sounding, IMO. :)

[TeenZine]

I personally don't like any of them. Is it possible for you to buy another domain thats better.